Sprint 4.2: The Personal Example

Claim: Most commuters would switch to buses if fares were abolished. Example: My commute takes fifty minutes by bus and twenty by car, so a small fare cut would not move me. → Rewritten claim:

Claim: Everyone in my country prefers to drive. Example: My friends all drive to work. → Rewritten claim:

Claim: Remote work costs juniors the training they used to absorb by proximity. Example: When I started my first job, nobody sat near me, and I learned nothing about handling clients for a year. → Rewritten claim:

Claim: The bus network is failing across the country. Example: I once waited two hours for a bus. → Rewritten claim:

Claim: Rising rents are driving people out of cities everywhere. Example: My rent rose by a third in two years while my salary did not move, so I left. → Rewritten claim:

Claim: A longer school day does not suit every family. Example: A parent working shifts cannot collect a child at three o'clock, whatever the school day is called. → Rewritten claim: