Vocabulary Word
Scenario:
The new design increased the airship's lift, but are there any changes to the manufacturing process to ensure the envelope can withstand such elevation?
Response:
We've added an additional layer of material to the envelope to prevent it from becoming overly turgid at high altitudes.
Scenario:
There's potential in this story, but the narrative style is challenging. What can we suggest to improve readability?
Response:
Perhaps the author could simplify the more turgid parts of the text, by primarily focusing on the pivotal events in the plot.