Improve paragraph order, topic sentences, and logical flow to boost Coherence & Cohesion.
Reorder paragraph ideas for coherence.
Drag the sentences into the correct logical order to build a coherent body paragraph.
Teach improving paragraph order, topic sentences, connectors, and reference.
A common IELTS mistake is cramming too many ideas into a single paragraph. This destroys Coherence.
To fix this, ensure each paragraph has exactly one central topic. If you start discussing the environment, don't suddenly switch to the economy in the same block of text. Keep it focused.
Gallery showing messy essay flow becoming clean paragraph flow.
Organizing messy thoughts into a logical flow improves Coherence.
Learner edits topic sentences and connectors.
Many companies now allow employees to work from home. , this flexible arrangement saves significant commuting time. This saved time, , can then be invested in family or personal hobbies. , businesses can reduce their expenditure on office space, a resource that is notoriously expensive in major cities. , despite these clear financial and personal benefits, remote work is not without its disadvantages. potential drawbacks must be carefully managed by employers to ensure overall productivity does not decline. If fail to do so, the initial advantages of telecommuting may quickly disappear.
Reflection on flow improvement.
What is the main difference you notice in readability when avoiding mechanical linkers?
Write down a topic sentence for an essay about 'remote work' and state what the rest of the paragraph MUST focus on.