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Balance traditional linking words with natural cohesive devices for a Band 7+ score.
Use reference words, repeated key nouns, and logical progression instead of just mechanical linking words.
Teach natural cohesion through reference words, repeated key nouns, contrast, cause, and logical progression.
Many IELTS students think that sprinkling words like Moreover, Furthermore, and Additionally into an essay will automatically boost their coherence score. However, cohesion is about the micro-level connection between sentences, not just robotic transition words.
Relying solely on mechanical linkers makes your writing feel rigid, artificial, and forced. Examiners can easily spot this "Band 5.5 template" style.
Visual showing the balance of cohesive devices.
Balance traditional linking words with natural cohesive devices for a Band 7+ score.
Fill appropriate connectors based on logic.
Word bank: As a result, This trend, However, these, Furthermore
Remote work has become increasingly popular over the last few years. , many employees now enjoy the flexibility of creating their own schedules. allows workers to save significant time and money by avoiding daily commutes. , some professionals argue that working from home can lead to feelings of isolation. Without face-to-face interactions, building strong team dynamics can be challenging. To overcome difficulties, companies are investing in virtual team-building activities. , regular video meetings help maintain clear communication among staff members.
Learner edits paragraph; AI flags overuse, wrong connector, unclear reference.
Paragraph to rewrite:
Firstly, public transport reduces traffic. Secondly, it lowers pollution. Moreover, it is cheaper than driving. Therefore, governments should invest in it.
Combine short sentences and use reference words like 'this', 'these', or synonyms to connect ideas.
Briefly explain which mechanical linkers you removed and what tools you replaced them with.