Student can evaluate and improve the FLOW and LOGIC of a piece of writing — not just the grammar.
Introduction to coherence, cohesion, and clarity
When evaluating a peer's essay or a textbook chapter, you might instinctively say, "It makes sense" or "It flows well." While these are okay starting points, higher-order academic writing requires a more precise diagnostic vocabulary. Great writing doesn't just "make sense"—it achieves clarity through an invisible but highly structured architecture.
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Identify logical and cohesive flaws in a sample paragraph
Read the following sentences: 'Photosynthesis produces oxygen. Therefore, gravity pulls apples toward the ground.' What is the primary flaw in this text?
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The sentence 'She gave her sister her book' is because we do not know whose book it is. Saying 'The project needs some stuff done soon' is too ; it lacks specific details and deadlines. To improve the of your science report, avoid using unnecessary jargon and explain your steps simply. A well-structured essay must be , meaning all paragraphs logically connect to support the main argument. Reading your writing out loud is a great way to check if it is , ensuring the sentences flow naturally without awkward pauses.
Rewrite a choppy, disconnected paragraph to make it coherent and cohesive
Rewrite the choppy paragraph above using logical connectors (e.g., because, consequently, however) and combine sentences to make the flow fluent and seamless.
Combine the short, choppy sentences into a flowing, logical sequence.
Briefly state how you improved the cohesion of the paragraph.
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