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Teach students to use editing and revision vocabulary to describe and improve their own work.
Introduction to revision and editing vocabulary.
Writing is only half the battle. The true magic happens when you go back to improve your work. Think of polishing your first draft like transforming a rough stone into a sparkling gem. To do this, you need a precise vocabulary of actions to help you reshape your sentences.
Visual doodles for editing and revision verbs.
An educational grid showing 8 simple hand-drawn style doodles representing editing actions: a rough diamond polished to …
Order the stages of writing and revising.
Arrange the stages of the editing process from the first draft to the final copy.
Fill-in-the-blank practice with editing verbs.
When you find spelling mistakes or grammatical errors in your draft, you must them before submitting.
If a paragraph is too long and complicated, you should the language so that middle school readers can easily understand it.
To make your argument stronger, you should the weak examples with more convincing evidence.
If a sentence sounds awkward, you can it by using different words to express the same idea more clearly.
Before finalizing your essay, you need to the entire structure to improve the overall flow and organization of your points.
Classify editing actions by scale.
Terms
Definitions
Rewrite a weak sentence and describe the changes.
Improve the weak, repetitive science sentence below:
"The experiment was done and then the results were seen and then we wrote them down."
Rewrite it to sound clear and professional, then identify which editing action you performed (such as simplify, rephrase, or correct).
Make the flow cleaner by removing repetitive connectors like 'and then'.
State the key action you used to tackle this sentence.
Flashcards for key revision verbs.